Wednesday, December 20, 2017

Summer Learning Journey Week 1 Task 2

Dear Brodi

I went to the most amazing place in the world it had plums the size of apple's huge right. So we crossed the pacific ocean and through all the beautiful islands and we finally arrived. we flew in to Auckland and drove to Paihia I was really Nervous to see what our new house looked like but then I was also excited. We found the address and pulled up in the car park it was an amazing house. 


  1. Kia Ora Alexis,

    What an awesome letter you've written! You've gone into such detail, I'm very impressed. Where were you coming from? Where was your home country before NZ in your letter?

    Keep up the great work Brodi!

    Nga mihi

  2. Hey Alexis.

    I really enjoyed reading your blog post. My name is Clare and I am part of the Summer Learning Journey. Thanks for sharing this post with us.
    This letter has let me know that you are from somewhere else in NZ or the World. I would love to know where?

    Hope to hear back from you in the comments below.


  3. Hey Alexis,

    This is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey team. I will also be reading and commenting on your blog over this summer. It's nice to be here to read your amazing work.

    You have written your a writing very personal letter and you also added some nice descriptive language such as "Plums the size of an apple" and "through all the beautiful islands". I wonder where you started your travel, did you come from the pacific islands? Perhaps somewhere in the East Asia or Hawaii?
    It will be great to have more descriptions of what you see, feel, hear, and smell during the journey to the new land.

    All the best,
    Jade C.